28.7.12

Poem No. 2

OK, so here's my second poem. I wrote it quite quickly after this first one (Take Your Offer Off The Table). I didn't think too much about rhyming, I just wanted to put down my feelings in a way that flowed and was a complete story.

Once I  the poem back after completing it; it occurred to me that it could possibly be interpreted both literally and metaphorically. I'll let you take make your own mind up...!


Pilot In the Sky 


Come and rescue me 
Take me away
Fly me high above the clouds
Where the sun always shines


Spin me around
Turn me upside down 
Pump adrenaline through my veins
And make my heart beat fast


Take me higher and higher
Further into the blue
Until my vision is blurred
And I can feel no hurt


I am under your power
But I have never felt so free
Don't take me back to the world below
Where I'll be returned to reality


Let this smile on my face last forever
For this day dream I will always treasure.

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